Incident occurred at the Polar Ice-Cap
By: Sin Yee
An incident had occurred on the polar ice-cap at 12.15pm, I was instructed to follow the marines to rescue people. A highly confidential mechanism was stolen and we were told to retrieve the property no matter what happens.
As we neared the glacier, I saw a man armed with gun, who I assumed was the murderer, pointing the gun toward his 3 other hostages, waiting to fire any time. Among them was a girl, trembling with fear, one of the man was shouting something which I can't comprehend as we were located quite far from the scene. Suddenly, the murderer grabbed hold of the poor girl and jumped into a tractor and took off. A man failed to stop him and was shot in the process. We watched the tractor took off in full speed, spin and turned as if it was out of control and soon crashed into big rock. The murderer and girl escaped the tractor before it crashed and both fell into the crevasse. The tractor was in no shape due to the huge impact.
Sound of planes were heard, and we knew that the air force had came to the rescue. They were firing their guns towards the ship, in attempt to kill the villains. A man had threw a rope into the crevasse and jumped into it after that. We were shocked by his actions, thinking he was crazy. Me and the rest of the marines waited anxiously, silently praying that both the man and the girl would made it out safely. God was indeed on our side as we saw another man pulled the man and girl up. The murderer was left in the crevasse, dead.
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